Music Video alterations after presentation and feedback.

After preseneting our rough video and recieving feedback from teachers, students and peers we understood what needed to be done to the video to help for a more entertaining and better representation of characters through our video. The feedback involved that we create more flashbacks, more cuts and more footage instead of greenscreen. However because of the short time-span in which we had to film and finish the video for the deadline only certian objectives were met.





As you can see we decided to add text to are footage to create a better opening to our music video. We used a formal script for a reason as it shows the concept of the video in a better light.















As you can see we added a cross dissolve transition for a better performance and cutting of the video. We used a black and white aesthetic to represent a flashback and gloomy mood.

As you can see because of the feedback that told us that we should have more cuts and shots in the video we filmed more footage, and to show the actual relationship of the two before the break up to give the characters more depth.

In this part of the video we added a slowmotion effect to make the footage more dramatic and to actually show that the performer is enraged about whats happened.